Evet... Komposizyon ve dengeler oturmaya başladı gördüğüm kadarı ile. Son 3 çalışmana tek yorum yazıyorum bu arada.
Renkler ve tipoda gelişmeye başladı. Bu rüzgarı iyi değerlendir derim. Güzel ve dengeli gidiyorsun.Tebrikler...
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Atatürk benim varoluş nedenimdir. Çünkü ben bir Türküm! Onu unutmak ve ondan vazgeçmek benim için ihanettir...
ei! this one's way too cool
though i have a comment... the colors and concept is great (that's what i like about it because it simply grabs attention) it was rugged but clean... but then again...there are some design elements that aren't clear. can't seem to see the "C" on the word concentrate... and is that a number? (the one that merged with the black smoke element)... and lastly, maybe you can do something about the Fender logo (at the bottom) to make it more clearer. you can also make it a bit smaller (just a tiny bit) to have a cleaner look. plus, the logo is blending with the strings. make the logo stand out apart from the other elements may it be of help! just keep it up!
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"a cup of coffee and my chaser is beer" - wulfbane
miyembro ng ph-photo
i cannot say anything about C it should more effective i think...i love clean works generally but this work was about my energy so you are right maybe it could be a little clean
thanks for sharing your comments again i will always wait from you!
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beauty is not about wearing someone else's coat...
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hnoe*
For every life thats taken
So much love is wasted
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beauty is not about wearing someone else's coat...
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hnoe*
For every life thats taken
So much love is wasted
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muhammed edip erdogan
But that's just my opinion.
Nicely done, though.
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You are the embodiment of pure freedom, but through my eyes, you are made of stone.
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Renkler ve tipoda gelişmeye başladı. Bu rüzgarı iyi değerlendir derim. Güzel ve dengeli gidiyorsun.Tebrikler...
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Atatürk benim varoluş nedenimdir. Çünkü ben bir Türküm! Onu unutmak ve ondan vazgeçmek benim için ihanettir...
though i have a comment... the colors and concept is great (that's what i like about it because it simply grabs attention) it was rugged but clean... but then again...there are some design elements that aren't clear. can't seem to see the "C" on the word concentrate... and is that a number? (the one that merged with the black smoke element)... and lastly, maybe you can do something about the Fender logo (at the bottom) to make it more clearer. you can also make it a bit smaller (just a tiny bit) to have a cleaner look. plus, the logo is blending with the strings. make the logo stand out apart from the other elements
--
"a cup of coffee and my chaser is beer" - wulfbane
miyembro ng ph-photo
i cannot say anything about C it should more effective i think...i love clean works generally but this work was about my energy so you are right maybe it could be a little clean
thanks for sharing your comments again i will always wait from you!
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beauty is not about wearing someone else's coat...
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